rate_review Reviews

This is an excellent AU. It flows, is engaging and captures one\'s interest from the start. The only thing I see that could be improved is the very few spelling errors scattered here, there and yonder. Please continue.

I really enjoy your story. I am just wondering when you will update the story because I am want to know if Ro gets with Ed or Al. Keep up the good work.

-pokeprod- Update >:D Fast. I\'m bored here! very nice chapter ;D

Hi there. I really liked your story. But I got really confused in chapter 12 Houghes was killed, but in the other chapters he was alive. At first I thought that it could be Envy in disguis and he was just wating to kill the others. If you could kind explan that to me I would aprishate it. My e-mail is graywolfm18@yahoo.com. Thank you later.

Hey there! I really enjoyed your story! I was really impressed by the depth and detail that you took this alternate world into. Not only the setting but the thought that went into the characters themselves to show just how much their personalities would have been changed through the different circumstances that they grew up in. I was most impressed by Roy Mustang, though. You really made him a much more perferrable character to my eyes. I didn\'t really like him before you! Not to mention the Elric Brothers, who are my fave characters naturally. I have a thing for Blonde Brothers and you really helped fill in my days! I can\'t wait for your next update! Take your time and make it the best you can! Yours Herme

Very good story, it has a good plot. How long until Roy and the boys are back together? I miss the angsting! Update please. I am very interested in this, I really like it.

Hi!

Um, I just went off to read the rest on ff.net cuz I just couldn\'t wait! ^^x Right now I can\'t wait for you to update that... 17th chapter (right?)!
I\'m happy Roy finally started to do some Alchemy himself... I LOVE that guy!

Keep it on! ^__________^x
~Horizont

I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter thus far...I was so happy to finally see a FMA series here at AFF, mainly just one shots, even tempted me to write one myself, but I\'m still fairly new to FMA. Anyways, how many chaps did you have up at FF before you decided to bring it here? I hope you put up more chaps within the next day or so. It\'s a very good read and I\'ve already recommended it to my friend, and I only recommend the best ^___~ I\'ll be checkin back in soon! Ja ne!

Okay, dunno where to start... I love this story, a lot! ^_^x It\'s one of the first in ages that kept me reading (let\'s say kept me glued to the screen) w/o a lemon! I\'ts just awfully funny and the characters are as much IC as the can be since it\'s AU. ^^x
Well, I\'m a Roy-Fangirl and a Roy-centered fic can never be wrong - but yours is special! I never realized how many blond characters FMA had!

I so hope you update soon and I also hope that all those ppl who didn\'t see Ai no Kusabi still read your fic, it\'s worth it! I myself found the world of AnK faszininating and you greatly menaged to fit Alchemy into that world!

Ciao-ciao!
~Horizont

i just got done reading through this and i really really hope you update it soon i can\'t belive that i am the first writing a review for your work! consider me one of your fans or something if thats not to strange. I really admire the fact that you put plot before smut (though i would like to see what you do with that) Any way hope you update soon