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November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
what a great story! I hope there are more chapters soon. You are awesome \(^0^)/
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January 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Honestly?! It was /fantastic/!!! I like the possessive Goku... and that even though he's stronger, he's the Uke in their relationship!!!
I really hope that you keep on writing /THIS/!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really hope that you keep on writing /THIS/!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is this fic finished or are you gonna finish it soon?
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December 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bulma and Goku really were like kids weren't they. I'm surprised that Goku could remember so many insults, also surprised Vegeta didn't blow a gasket at both of them and storm out.
No preparation! Ouch! Typical of Goku putting others first, but nice of Vegeta to slow him, showed he really did care for him. No need to brace yourself, it was a great lemon :)
No preparation! Ouch! Typical of Goku putting others first, but nice of Vegeta to slow him, showed he really did care for him. No need to brace yourself, it was a great lemon :)
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, ok, Bulma doesn't seem so bad now, but I'm with Goku in not trusting her. I guess he will have to speak to her eventually though.
Lol, even Bunny spotted that Trunks and Goten should be mates :) Bet she'll be knitting booties soon now the cat's out of the bag about their physical differences to humans.
Lol, even Bunny spotted that Trunks and Goten should be mates :) Bet she'll be knitting booties soon now the cat's out of the bag about their physical differences to humans.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
okay first of all a chapter is never too long if the fic is any good, and your fic is good, I'm sure I can speak for all of your readers when I say we want more and the longer the better lol anyway good job cant wait for the update
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you're continuing this - do please keep it coming. ;D
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bulma seemed to give up pretty easily, I was expecting more of a fight and some more sneaky moves. Guess you didn't want to demonize her completely. As long as she backs off I'm happy.
I like the friendship between Goten and Vegeta and hope they can find a way to get Trunks to see Goten as a potential mate. Maybe he his has all those girlfriends as a cover and doesn't feel anything for them. Hope so :)
What's this about a person Vegeta says to watch out for? Did I miss that bit or is it in next chapter?
I like the friendship between Goten and Vegeta and hope they can find a way to get Trunks to see Goten as a potential mate. Maybe he his has all those girlfriends as a cover and doesn't feel anything for them. Hope so :)
What's this about a person Vegeta says to watch out for? Did I miss that bit or is it in next chapter?
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October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad Vegeta seems receptive and what is that sweet smell he's giving off. He mentioned that Goku was acting on his Saiyan instincts so is he is heat, or is Vegeta?
I like to join the list to kill Bulma, she's a right bitch in this fic, and I fear she will try to mess things up even more :(
I like to join the list to kill Bulma, she's a right bitch in this fic, and I fear she will try to mess things up even more :(
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October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story can't wait for more