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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter i loved the ying and yang thing it made goku seem so wise and smart which im sure he is. i hate it when people make him seem stupid though i wonder if bulma done with the lies or does she got more.
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, awesome man. Way to Leave it hanging. Please write more, if you don\'t I think I\'ll cry.
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O please update!!! =]
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just love this story. It is nice to see Vegeta relaxing enough to talk and joke with Goku. Goku would have loved that time on the swings - that would have been a special day for him with Vegeta actually conversing. I wonder what Bulma has to show Vegeta - has she faked something or misrepresented something? Looking forward to the next chapter. How will Goku get out of this?
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Someone\'s been puttting their computer skills to use making some one angry.
I look forward to the next chapter.
And the colors? I use inline styles in the reviews..
I look forward to the next chapter.
And the colors? I use inline styles in the reviews..
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well im glad my name makes you hungrey lol anyway i want to know what bulma showed vegeta did she make a video with goku kissing her and showed vegeta or what i must know.
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE! I love your story so much! ^_______^
But Bulma is evil, kill her please! Neway, great chapter update soon! c ya!
But Bulma is evil, kill her please! Neway, great chapter update soon! c ya!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O I certainly say it DID backfire. What is that coniving b***h up to? Well, I guess I know what she\'s up to, but man is she playing dirty or what?
As for the rest of this chapter, awe, I loved it. The dream sequence was sooooo cute? Well, not quite the word I am looking for, but close.
I really thought something more was going to happen after their spar when they were flirting. Did they realise they were flirting? Probably not.
I hope the situation gets clarified soon before Goku ends up dead. Eep!
As for the rest of this chapter, awe, I loved it. The dream sequence was sooooo cute? Well, not quite the word I am looking for, but close.
I really thought something more was going to happen after their spar when they were flirting. Did they realise they were flirting? Probably not.
I hope the situation gets clarified soon before Goku ends up dead. Eep!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, oh! What\'d she show him! Oh no! Update soon! ^_^
Seriously, love this. The first chapter intrigued me and the second two have hooked me. Always thought Buruma had something for the little \'monkey boy.\' Heh. ^_^
Impatiently looking forward to more!
Seriously, love this. The first chapter intrigued me and the second two have hooked me. Always thought Buruma had something for the little \'monkey boy.\' Heh. ^_^
Impatiently looking forward to more!
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. How did I miss reading this? Excellent fic. I\'m really enjoying reading it. I liked the part where Vegeta was taking care of Goku- cute!
What did Bulma show Vegeta? Great cliffhanger, now update, please! (My ass is going numb from being on the edge of my seat)
What did Bulma show Vegeta? Great cliffhanger, now update, please! (My ass is going numb from being on the edge of my seat)