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for Shattered Night

by Kira

person fyrbyrd
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s easy to come back to a good story, but you left it there!!! The rose petals floating off after a Kamehameha wave! Hint Hint.
person moonlight6056
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I love this story I cant wait to hear more of it, it has my fav couple, *nods* I cant wait to see what’s going to happen! What did Bulma say? *Wonders* oh well I shall just have to wait for the next update! Review you then!
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HATE BULMA!!! WHAT DID SHE TELL VEGETA??? WHAT DID SHE SHOW HIM???? FUCKING WHORE!!!! SHE MUST DIE!!!!
person Wow
schedule February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue--it\'s one of the best written DBZ stories I\'ve read in awhile. Can\'t wait for more!
person geta_gfan
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic , without mentioning that this is my favorite paring.I like the way you made Vegeta act and I hope things workout between him and Goku.
Please update soon.
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really??? *spies Bulma and beats her with a metal stick until she is squishy gloop* You\'re going to make this really evil, aren\'t you? It\'s so angsty!!! Me love angst!!! *grins* Updates rock! *hint hint*
person Sarkywoman
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of Bulma in a giant fighting robot trying to kill Goku and Vegeta all tied up in ribbons waiting for the victor. But then, that could just be me. Anyway, I like your portrayal of Goku and the way he\'s beginning to get a little competitive.
person kit-kit
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hug you back* thanks for the update i can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Macha
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How in the heck did I miss the first chapter? This is great. I was like, Ah, NO BULMA he doesn\'t mean you (hehe, only because I saw the summary though)

Off to chapter 2
person Macha
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a spar? Goku, are you crazy? hehe, yeah, he is, about Vegeta. *shakes head and laughs*

I am glad he decided NOT to be the one to tell Vegeta what was going on. That was the best desision, even if it doesn\'t get them closer to where both I and Goku want the two of them to be. *smirks*

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