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for Shattered Night

by Kira

person fyrbyrd
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice going, really can\'t wait to see more. Thank you.
person jaygoose
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehe... *dances around giddly* Oh thank gods for an awesome story! It always good to stumble upon something this good. Your descriptions of Goku\'s emotions and even Bulma\'s was flawless. I\'m not sure if I\'d go as far as to bitch slap Bulma just yet. I mean she\'s constantly surrounded by two Saiyan gods. I think it would be a little hard to keep ones hands off either of them. You can\'t blame the girl for hoping.

I think it cute how Vegeta\'s taking care of Goku...even if it is just for a good fight.

I know you don\'t I. I\'ve seen your name somewhere before right? Or I could just be crazy. I am known for that. I hope you continue on this path, I can\'t wait to see what going to happen with these three.
person Pixelgoddess
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Goku - so conflicted. He wants to break up Bulma and Vegeta so he can have a chance at Vegeta, but he doesn\'t want Vegeta to be hurt. Vegeta was in character while still being nice. I liked how he helped Goku to his feet. He has an impatient patience - makes you wonder if wanting to spar is his only motive. You write very well, BTW. Well done.
person Webtester01
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2


    I\'m glad Goku is eating again.  I wonder how the
interrogation with Bulma will go. *smirk*


    I look forward the the next chapter of your fic.


    ~Webtester01~

person Webtester01
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 2


    I\'m glad Goku is eating again.  I wonder how the
interrogation with Bulma will go. *smirk*


    I look forward the the next chapter of your fic.


    ~Webtester01~

person Anon
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think its great ...........keep going with the story. Thats it bye :)
person Webtester01
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 1


So that is who he has feelings for.  I wonder if you-know-who overheard the conversation.  Two people would be hurt by the ones they loved most.  Love triangles are such  thorn in the side; the shape has three sharp points: one for each heart.


I really look forward to the next chapter.  Keep up the good work.


~Webtester01~

person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this a lot so far! I feel sorry for Bulma, getting the wrong idea and all, but I like this a lot. I feel more sorry for Goku actually....getting slapped by Bulma! *bitch slaps Bulma* She is such a hypocrite!!! You\'d better update this soon, I\'d really appreciate it! ^^
person kit-kit
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god that is so sad he didn\'t mean to bulma shouldn\'t of asked him to tell her if she wasn\'t expecting the un expected
person Fyrbyrd
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'d better keep going, coz I definitely want more of my favorite pair
Thanx

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