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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!! OMG WHAT A STORY!!!! LOVE IT!!!! Great work!!
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February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
squeal! :D:D i like.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It good but at the same time, it really doesnt make much sense. Does Duo, have his own house or a room with more rooms, or do they all share a house. And the whole running from the dojo to the room thing, so is the dojo in the house. Etc... Do you see what I mean. The portraying of characters was good, and the overall plot, it just wasnt put together very well. Still liked it though. Just needs a little work. Keep at it.