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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, the first two parts were ok, although it was difficult to rad them at midnight. i admit they are good but what should i tell? they were good. BUT the third part was awsome! i woke up in the instant and almost woke up everybody in the house with my giggles. when you write another part of \'caress me down\', please, please, PLEASE make it similiar to the 3rd part (i mean the atmosphere)! i\'ll be looking forward to the update. see ya!
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September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story series. I love the character interaactions. Please continue.
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this whole story has been amazing. Your portayal of emotions is incredible, and everyone was IC. I even cried at some parts, which I almost never do. Please, please, update this, because this is an amazing story, and I would love to see this finished.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!!
TELL ME THERE WILL BE MORE!!!!!!!!! *demand demand demand*
This is perfect. You have no idea... Ed is just too cute being all teenagery-anger-management boy and Roy is... pretty much the ass hole I always thought him to be, but still almost human... somewhere in there...
Hughes-san makes an enterance. ^_^ I love Hughes. And Ed.
Al\'s pretty dead on too, I compliment you on your amazing in-character fanfic, being that it\'s kinda yaoi and the show isn\'t... Go you! *two thumbs up* Now... finish! Scribo Celeritis!
TELL ME THERE WILL BE MORE!!!!!!!!! *demand demand demand*
This is perfect. You have no idea... Ed is just too cute being all teenagery-anger-management boy and Roy is... pretty much the ass hole I always thought him to be, but still almost human... somewhere in there...
Hughes-san makes an enterance. ^_^ I love Hughes. And Ed.
Al\'s pretty dead on too, I compliment you on your amazing in-character fanfic, being that it\'s kinda yaoi and the show isn\'t... Go you! *two thumbs up* Now... finish! Scribo Celeritis!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY DORITOS THIS WAS LONG! But worth reading, update soon
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when are you updating????
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey the fic is awesome. I love the Roy/Ed pairings and the way you wrote this is just incredible. I have one question though. Does the third chapter take place a couple of years after the first and second? It seemed that way, but maybe I\'m wrong. Update soon can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it. ADORE it. Please keep adding to it. This has to be my all time, favourite Full Metal Alchemist fiction yet. Yay! Thank you!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you\'ve put a ton of work into this, I can tell, and I really appreciate it. It\'s rare to find a piece of fan fiction so carefully written and researched as what you have here. I really encourage you to finish this--I want to see what happens next! :3 Thanks for taking the time to write such a worthwhile piece ^^
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really very well written. I have been looking for more on the characters...to understand them...since someone challeneged me to write an FMA story and your story is extremely helpful in that (yes, that is a compliment...From what I\'ve seen, you write the characters very well). I look forward to your next installment!