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for Unresolved

by sinistra

person drake220
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey. i haven\'t seen that episode but i have read the full manga (or as much as is posted by fullmetalalchemist.com) i am now vert excited to see ep. 37. great continuation! you know what you have to do for chapter three right? reality! and preferablly they get caught. but thats just me...
person wutTf
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Keep it up!
person A big fan
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your work, you\'re an incredibally talented girl. You need to do another chapter where they actually do it (it\'d be funny if they thought it was a dream though hehehehe...). Anyways, keep up the good work!
person Citadel
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is poetic and flowing and all I have to say is, \"It\'s about damn time a talented author took up the FMA pen!\" More please, maybe you could make \"Unresolved\" into \"Resolved\"? Pretty please? (Sweet innocent blinks) Eagerly awaiting more...
person drake220
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
delicious ending!! i adored it!
person Shadiyaray
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hot!! I was not expecting that in the end. Great story.
We need more Riza and Roy stories.
person animechick262003
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice! wondeful change from that damned YOI!
person Wow
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cheesy? Yes
Trashy? Just a little
Yummy? Hell yea!

You must make a second chapter to this >_<

I to am a crazy obsessed Mustang fan girl! haha

Loved your fic I thought it was a tad bit too short but meh it was wonderful! ^_^
If you ever decide to continue this or write a whole entire differnet fic on Roy/Riza I beg you to e-mail me!
Thank yas for the great read!
-Wow
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! You have to do a second chapter for this! this is actually the first FMA fic I have ever read, I normally stick to Naruto, but I checked the Latest, and your fic caught my eye, I really like FMA, and Roy is just so damned hott! Too hot! fans self. A second chapter definately, with Riza fantasizing about him. Wow, I liked your story so much, I may have to go look for other Roy/Riza fics now.

e-mail me if you update, pretty please? with Roy on top? And Ed for good measure?

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