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Lol this is so f*cked up!

LOL WOW--UNBELIEVABLE STORY! WELL DONE! UN-BE-LIEVABLE! I ACTUALLY FELT BAD FOR YAMCHA!!

Sorry, I keep reviewing like FF.net by chapter!

Lmao, so hilarious, yet evil, and I honestly do feel bad for Yamcha though. It has gone a bit far! Oh my!

LAUGHING MY A** OFF; truly a unique story

Wow, I LOVE this and I don't know why! It's so bloody EVIL!

Wow at this, lol:

He restrained himself form hissing and spitting like an animal and merely narrowed his eyes as he replied in a dignified manner. “You have cheated on your current partner by engaging in sexual relations with me.”

it was good but you should make another one were vageta does fall in love with bulma and does not threaten her.

Wow! This story is amazing! It really shows Vegeta's evil side. It's quite scary actually, but great! Keep up the awesome work.

totaly cool! but so so s..s..sc..scary.....brrrr! also gives me the creeps (both in a good way and scary way)anyway i like the idea of freeza\'s daughter being a little well... a little tweeny gay? but ew! anywayz totally awesome setting and plot. and yeah the begining was also scary when bulma was captured by the slave traders and all...but scary when them dudes raped her. gotz 2 go now, but keep up the good work,cant wait till the next chapter

OH MY GOODNESS! I\'M PANICKING! What? what the.... u know what?....that was uh...dark!
no offence...but terrible...terrible ending(unless is just a joke to make us think that is just the semi-finale part, but actually u have planned to surprise us with a real better ending where vegeta turns into a good guy and yamcha or what ever u people call him turns bad) please...u have to tell me that i\'m just hearing things or...my immagination has been going way too far, but did i just read that that was the ending? come on? there\'s gotta be more than dat!
other than the ending...everything went smoothly well..and i liked it! please don\'t hunt me down at night for saying those horrible things at u (i just got out of surgery!)

Hey it was really good. But befor i get to the ending of any fic. I always try to guess how it will end. And i thout that it would be funny if wene i got to the end it was all a dream like went back to the beginging wene Vegeta was in the tree. i dont know but it was good!!!