rate_review Reviews

godsDAMMIT. i am not into spanking, a friend recommended this fic, i almost overlooked it... but i forced myself to keep reading.

no regerts.

AMAZINGLY WRITTEN. you narrated it in a way that is... idk how to describe it O_O believable? understandable? [saiyan] culturally acceptable? all i know is that i loved this story. it might even become a headcanon of mine, since i'm in the middle of exploring saiyan culture and gathering all the information that strikes me as plausible, canon and fanon-wise.

so, thank you for sharing. i will be sure to credit you if i ever mention the traditions of 'kabuya' ;)

this is a really really good story... i think that you should continie with it or something... ihope you do its very intersting and I like it

sadistic! interesting but man i hated being spank as a child!

Well.. I\'VE flamed before, though I don\'t feel any inclination towards that at the moment. To be honest, this was well written, though I\'m going to be truthful and say it made me feel... awkward? Uncomfortable? I don\'t know why but that whole \"Move your cock and balls\" thing made me click the X box for a second. I think you did VERY well on the delivery and your vocabulary (and imagination) are a force to be reckoned with.

Maybe something a little less... what\'s the word I\'m looking for? ... a little less... awkward would be nice next time.

Camaro

Aww! That was really good! Great job!

Wow. Cool. Not much I can actually think to say. No critiscism...no flame (which I\'ve NEVER done)... I enjoyed this a lot...the explanations and stuff was good...plot was good...writing was VERY good... and...ummm...write more stories soon, okay?

excellent attempt to explain the precepts of D/s...decent portrayal of spanking and the concept of atonement...

written pretty well...couple typos...nothing big...

I\'d like to see more from you...

wow that was great nobody every wrote something like this though i wonder why im sure alot of people got a spanking when they were young.