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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was uhmm well... disturbing but in a good way! keep it up! and i cant wait for the nxt chapter pls udate soon ^_^ thanks...( i might sound weird but can u do it a threesome? just a suggestion that way everybody is happy esp me hehehe ^_~)
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a great story!! But what I really want to see happen is Goten getting back together with Trunks without interference from Gohan. =3
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow update soon
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My God Gohan is so manipulative... Goten isn\'t free of him even inside his own mind. Goku\'s the only one that can save him, since he also has this psychic abilities... isn\'t he?
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is wrong with you!!!!!!!!!! why did you stop?
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February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good very good :) please update soon!
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This seems a lot like Android22\'s Innocent Child
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow thats some weird stuff, update soon pwease