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Damnnn..this story was so damn good..I really loved it! You are very creative :D but really though this story was awesome..so sexy n just oh my! lol that's a good oh my..like a yummy oh my..by the way..lol but I love all of your stories so..I knew this one was gonna ge good too..Keep it up :D

I am so glad that I found this story. Normally I don't stray in het category but I found it by your name. It is swell!! it is hot as ever. I love how Vegeta tricked Goku into the relationship and how Goku react to it. it is so very sweet, beyond sweet. This is the story I was looking for in the current world, how Vegeta and Goku be together. If I can ask something I would like to see a bit more realisation and interaction between the two before Goku took the aggressive role. But I love how 18 analyse them, truethfully as an android should do.

And the last chapter, phew! IT IS THE HOTTEST EVERY LEMON I HAVE EVER SEEN!

Vegeta finally loose control and let Goku lead and aggressive goku is my favorite. it is hot hot and hot. thank you for another good stroy. Love from

topbear

On the 3rd chapter, I realized you were the author and thought, 'so thats why the story is so good'! Kami, this story is too hot!. (sizzle!) You are so talented, I'm almost envious! I hope to write good stories like you some day, but what do I know I'm just a newbie. But this is great, and I sure am glad that you added both het and yaoi. I love this story.

Everything I thought this fic was gonna be, it wasn't. It was so much finer! It really stands out from the usual G/V get-togethers. I especially enjoyed the Briefs' family relations, and the scene at the river was wonderful, too, especially the banter. But the claiming scene was so unbearably warm. . . wow. On hiatus, you say? Well, I'm up for more anytime, but really, as an ending, it's not too shabby. Not at all. Big thumbsup and a round of applause! Keep it coming!

Hmm I read this a while ago, but I saw, I dont think i reviewed it... How rude of me! I did like it, Great job!!! I dont know if I could ever write a real Yaoi,
I'll try one day...Thank you for your reviews, One of my favorite parts was Bra's seduction of Goku and then his punishment!! I have always remebered about 18's
data base, and that Chichi was a potetial ally.

I enjoyed reading this. The story is very fun and descriptions are very vivid (I thoroughly enjoyed reading about Goku and Vegeta at the lake catching, frying and eating their fish). Hahaha, sure the other descriptions are very vivid too; they are great!

Bulma ran away with Chichi? Well, that’s interesting. Somehow I think they would bite each other’s throat first, hahaha. Well, but both can shout, can stand up for themselves, and lifestyle…I heard opposites attract each other. ^_^

Cooking oil? ^_^

I\'ve fallen so far behind on reviewing this - I am a bad little goddess. :(

So Goku has learned to be suspicious of other\'s actions, especially Bra\'s. She is not one of my favorite people - much too devious and manipulative. I\'m hoping Gohan sees right through her, actually. It is kind of strange that Goku would sit by passively while his son ate something he suspected was tampered with.

Nice to see Goku finally realizing how much he had been manipulated. Poor Vegeta - he really blew it this time.

Interesting view of 18 and her accessing her databanks. At least she can analyze what she has seen, giving Goku the information he needs to make a decision.

Love it when a passive Goku becomes aggressive. It throws everyone and everything off balance. Shower scene is very hot - the black tiles are a nice touch. Saiyan sex and blood just seem to go together so well. It is like Vegeta has relaxed to the inevitable. Goku sure does like to bite, doesn\'t he? *g*

This story was just too damn good for words ;) If you decide to add to it please e-mail me a link :)

My only regret at this point is that I want to see what happens with Gohan. ^^ Otherwise, OH MY! This last encounter was particularly on the hot side of things. LOL Goodness, that was a rather tasty lemon. I also have to say that I liked that at one point Vegeta got annoyed with the too compliant Kakarot... it happens in real relationships -- too much of a good thing can sometimes get annoying.

Oh, and thank you! for the Gotenks! Gosh they really should have had them fuse in GT along with the millions of other things they should have done in GT. That is one fusion I really would have enjoyed seeing.

Very nice. I love it when a PWP just demands even more and thus becomes more. Great job.

Jana (Dharmaserenity)

B-E-A-U-tiful! I love hot shower sex, wonder-fucking-ful! Sorry you are taking a Hiatus, I really love this fic. You left everything clean and easy so it is an almost ending, and fans are happy.

I got a thank you in the Author\'s notes! EEEE!!!!!
~GLOMPS MAJORLY~ Thank you for the fic, all I did was read and drool over it. ^.^