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OMG!!! AWESOME uke Vegeta lemon!!!! I PRAISE you!!! *hugs* Go Macha!

Wow! I love the whole idea of the sparring as a form of flirtation in Saiyan culture. Never had thought of it before and I just love Goku\'s going over it in his mind, thinking of the times that Vegeta would tilt his chin to expose his neck or growled, etc. Great theory. Vegeta fighting is very erotic and you made it intentional. Love it. I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

jana

Sorry about the EXTREMELY late review but my internets been up and down for a while and among other things I\'d rather not go into detail about. I\'m actually just now reading part 5...can you believe that? Anyway, good chapter as always. I see that Goku\'s feelings are starting to come in to play about Vegeta...I wonder where this is going. Another short review, wish I could say more but you know I never was good at reviewing stories. When I get the time I\'ll definitely read the rest and I hope its not very long \'cuz I really like this fic. ^_^

Woohoo! This was the sexiest chapter of all! Wait... hiatus!? Indefinitely!? *big teary eyes* NOOOO! *sniffle*

Do write something soon. I\'ll be waiting. ^^

Yuurei

Im sippin a coke, and I see this is updated. So I spit out my coke, type yell to Elfy that god loves me, and read it.


IF you don\'t update this, I can be fine with that.


HOLY FUCKING FUCK!

Well, that first chapter was sexy. Now that I know at least how this has started, the title of the piece is fantastic. And I love the first chappie title! LOL Very clever. And very hot. Poor Goku, why do I think his innocense is about to go bye-bye.

dude all i can say is that was very interesting and i think that you should definitly continue it with more chapter\'s. that was like leaving some one hanging from a cliff lol either way though good job look forward to seeing more.

YAAY!! It\'s all getting sorted! *laughs at Vegeta and licks her lips* Maybe I should take advantage of him...

Vegeta: *growls and snarls*

O.O Maybe not...he\'d kill me... >.>

Nice chapter! More soon! *shakes fist* More I say! Hope you enjoyed hockey :P

Have I said how much I love this thing?


If not, I love it. A lot.

HEHEHE Things are getting ugly, aren\'t them? Wonder what Vegeta are gonna do now, after all, he was the one evading Kaks...