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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far, chapter 4 is my current favorite of this fic. I don\'t know why. I was just more taken with this chapter than the others. Do update again soon please. ^-^
Yuurei
Yuurei
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March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I wish you would\'ve made Gohan fuck Bra senseless in chap 3! But still good work. Now on to chapter 4!
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March 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ I seem to recall some of this... *shrugs*
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March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just read part 2...and loved it, great job! Keep the sex cumming!
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKING HELL! That was SOOOOOO fucking hot! I can\'t wait for the next chapter, I wonder if Bra and Gohan will end up getting down and dirty ~.^ UPDATE SOOONNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read chapter one...so far so good and very kinky. I liked how you portryed Bra...you know like the slut she is. But I must ask you what the hell ever possessed you to make Bra want to watch something like that between Goku and her father? But good intentions nonetheless. Keep up the good work.
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh...more characters to join in the fun. You\'re doing a great job on this story and I can\'t wait to see how it continues to progress. I feel bad for Goku and Vegeta with their wives not only running off together, as if that wasn\'t already a big enough slap in the face, but also disappearing into the stream of time. Ouch... Anyway update again soon.
~Yuurei~
~Yuurei~
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very Good! Hope you\'ll write more.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yum. better than i thought it would be, and i surprised myself by finishing the second chapter. i\'m not much of one for V/G, but, well, kudos ::double thumbs up::
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another sexy chapter. I almost feel bad for Goku, but then again...he\'s enjoying himself, so there\'s no need for pity. More please!
Yuurei
Yuurei