rate_review Reviews

hey, did you ever write that other story, or did you decide not to/give up on it? You know, the teaser thing at the end of this story? Please let me know, I'm very interested in reading it if it exists ^.^

That wuz hot! A little too graphic but hey it is Adult Fanfiction.net rite? lol So are Trunks and Kakota or whateva gonna get together? UPDATE SOON!!!

Well, I won\'t be reading anymore but good luck!

Camaro

*keels over with laughter* I can\'t believe Vegeta just walked in on him like that! ^o^ Poor Trunks...but that should teach him about masturbating in the shower when his father is standing right outside... *snickers* But anyway, good chapter, adn I hope to see more soon! I want to know all about this prize...*grins*

Well hello hello darlin\'! This is pretty damn good if I do say so myself although, babe, you need a beta reader like it\'s going to the movies! haha.. Just send me the chapters and I\'ll fix some of the spelling errors for you

::is actually planning an evil plot to get your chapters first and read them before any of the other schmucks get to::

Muahaha

Anyways, yeah, really interesting content there, cept that whole Gohan/Trunks thing seemed unnecessary and completely out of the blue but HEY!.. I don\'t know what you have planned and all that jazz so who knows. Really good so far, I\'m impressed.

Camaro

Yeah, that\'s right BITCH! *kicks Tohma* ^o^ Yes, anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter. The bit where Trunks vomited blood seemed a little rushed, but other than that I thought it was pretty good. I don\'t know if I\'ve said it before, but I really like your plot. I can\'t wait to see it flesh out more.

Oi! *giggles madly* The idea of a drunken Trunks! That is something I would love to see! \"I thought it was fruit juice...\" Sure, baby, that\'s what they all say... ^_~ I hope for another chapter soon!

Enough alcohol to kill an elephant? Hahaha...poor Trunks. At least the other Saiyans know he can hold his liquor now. I like the story so far and you\'re pretty quick with updating too. Keep it up!

Yuurei

Oh, I\'m really liking the way your story is going! Yeah, there are the spelling errors, but it\'s nothing a good beta reader couldn\'t fix. Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Two years of alcohol and a stripper...amusing. I\'m curious to see what happens next so update soon.