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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. *peaks through fingers covering face* I think the saying, \"Be careful what you ask for,\" applies here.

OMG, you did it! You pulled off the \'Vegeta is a prick\' story VERY well. Vegeta isn\'t a character I want to hate, but here I do. I just want to scream ASSHOLE. *sobs*


Yamcha? *cringes* EEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwww. I think planet destruction is now in order. *nods*

Well written. My hat goes off to you.

Eep, Very angsty. Not certain if \'liked\' is the correct word to use here. I\'ll have to digest this for a while before I am really certain how I feel about it. I can say this, I could certainly feel what Goku was feeling.

So, here would be the challange, could you write a Vegeta POV where he really had nothing but self motivation in all of this? I would find that very difficult to write.

Ahhhh Finally! Someone who keeps Vegeta\'s character as the heartless asshole that he is. This is a masterpiece.. good fucking job!

Camaro