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for The Forgotten Breed

by DiablosAngel

person Alexzander
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very wonderful idea! There were a few errors I noticed though in both chapters. Most of them were spelling errors or using the wrong word (\"rapped in my clothes\" opposed to WRAPPED in my clothes). I enjoyed your writing even with the few errors that I noticed.
person emerald eyes
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update again soon! by the way, why is heero such a bastard in this one? and if the war did end, what would happen to all the other g-pilots?
person yukiko
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gush, Heero is such an ass. how come ?
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow Heero\'s a fucking bastard. I can\'t wait for more though.

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