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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok this is good but there something that bothers me about this fic. I do not like how you just keep to Duo\'s POV I mean it\'s great and all but you also have to add some depth to the other characters such as in a chapter five them a POV or go into third person POV. I\'m just saying it will help for the ohter characters to develop as well as Duo. Well update soon.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, I\'m enjoying it immensely...i\'m just wondering though...are you going to do anything from Quatre\'s P.O.V.??
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow , please keep going
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great. I love it
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February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great. I love it
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippee....You updated... I like this story. I wish the pace went a little faster though but I can deal with that. I know that the guys have special privledges and stuff but why/how does Tro have a panther in the apartment. I know he can talk to animals but...
Anyways...good story and please update soon.
Anyways...good story and please update soon.
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February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I could wish that the pace was faster but I\'m sure that you have your reasons. I\'m still curious about Tro\'s animals though.
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good one....please continue
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February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re story is very interesting, but also a little confusing. I have no clue who or what Quatre and the others are. The story needs to be explained a little more by telling the reader who they are and what they do. Most importantly I have no clue what these collars or training signifies or how the main characters were injured. If it isn\'t to much trouble I would greatly appreciate a little more explanations of the situation so I may view the story the way you are seeing it.