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Please! Please! UPDATE!!!!!

Woweee! Awesome story. This story has so much imagination and great details, I'm very impressed. Vegeta is one evil demon! I really love how you portrayed the characters in such an imaginative and different way than most other DBZ stories. Great stuff!

Well i was browsing and saw this so i just decided to give you a review for all other stupid people who get bord and read this! Read this story! It is freaking awsome! I have told camaro multiple times to change the names and make an origonal because this story is so FREKING awsome. ^^ So yes my little tid bit is over.^^
Love~

I found it! I origanlly read this fiction on fanfiction.net and when it was deleted I was some what deveistated. I found this website and decided to see if you were here and I was lucky enough that you were! Please put up the rest of the chapters because this story is seriously one of the best and I have waited forever >.< Please and thanks to you. ^.^

.... There\'s less then on Fanfiction.net... -cries- I\'llll have to be patient then.... -waits-.. but it\'s sooooo longggggggggg

Ana, The MCLover!!
And the biggest fan ever.... i\'ll chase you down mouhahahahahahha XD!!!
I\'m joking you... ^^ Love, till next!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

You know i think it\'s sad you view me and my story that way cuz if you read further you would see that your views on my story are wrong Bulma and Vegeta did not have sex yet and the only dirty stuff was in the first chapter. i know this concept is used before that\'s why i made the rest of my story completly diferent and lets be honest most concepts have been used before. that\'s why this will probably be the first and the last dragonball story i write i like writing original stories allot more. i hope you\'ll take the time to read my stories better before making an opinion about them, because i did the same with yours and dark angel is one of the best stories i ever read.

Princess Yente.

i loved it! please continue writing!

I\'ve reviewed this story too many times already, on every website I can catch it on. One of the greatest pieces of literature I have ever had the honor of reading, no exaggeration. Please post the rest of it, I beg of you...it deserves to be in every corner of the internet it can get.

Fuck it, it deserves to be published.

Edit it, change the names, and publish it. This is gold. Everything you write is gold. You have a talent too marvelous for fanfiction.

Keep up the awesomness, and please consider a carreer in writing. Please.

Love this chapter, like how we get to see a bit of Bulma\'s cunning and her willingness to do what has to be done to preserve her own life. Forgive if am typing funny, new back meds from doc are kicking my ass, but not enough to keep me from seeing what a wonderful chapter this was. Update soon Camaro!


Love ya babe!

Vegeta\'s Mate

Oh nice. Bulma got him in the groin and put some nice scratches on his face. I\'m glad to see she didn\'t just let herself be kidnapped. Yes, she\'s weaker and she doesn\'t stand a snowball\'s chance in hell of escaping, but I love that fighter\'s spirit. I found myself cheering out loud when her kick connected to Draco\'s more sensitive area. I can\'t wait to see that spirit tested against Vegeta. Also, throughout the chapter I kept imagining Bulma as a kind of glow in the dark star as she was carried through the forest, illuminant in her surroundings. ^^ Update again soon, please.

~Yuurei~