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*gloomy* waiting eagerly for update, but it seems like such a long time. Writer's Block again?

Hope that you'll update soon. The wait is killing. ><

This fic is really good. I'm kinda sad that the updates seems to be taking quite a while. Pls update soon. Would look forward to it. ^^

i really like the first four chapters so far. the characters you added are pretty cool and i can't wait to see more aspects of their personalities. can't wait for the next update.

I liked this fic very much. Am a fan of MPregs. kekeke. Hope to see Roy soon. Update! Update! ^^

.... Ed HATES milk.
you made al say that ed likes milk.
T.T noooooooooooooo!!!!!!!

O.O..... a preggie Ed... thats odd but so cool. i LOVE preggies guys........ please update..... me likes me likes

This is so cool!

This story is way WAY awesome please do decide to continue it.

Hello, I have been reading this fic from before u last went and updated and deleted a few chapters it is looking better! keep up the good work ! I would love to see Al with some one that understands his more gentle side of nature unlike Roy and Edward. Maybe that character should be assertive but not necessarily dominant... Beside the point the grammar is fine but needs to be tweeked just a bit in chapter to the story is just a little choppy. There was a time frame on ur first which helped a little bit and ; to understand why Ed was sick from the begining.

Please as a dedicated fan of FMA
don't name him name the new guy Zack pretty please =)
he will need a cool name to compliment Alphonse


thanks for listening to me rant blue inu

Update soon please i love this story! Please make sure Roy realy gets what he deserves! Al Kick his ass!

Keep up the incredible work that u are producing!

Thanks,
Blue Inu