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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS FIC! Please finish it please please PLEASE:)!
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, this is interesting, please update soon, i really want to see what will happen.
see you
see you
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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O......one word:....amazing....ya...anywho you must update!!!please? ^.~
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how the whole thing is funny and really good. The whole equivalent exchange thing was a really cool idea. The only thing you need to do now is update it and finish it soon, even though it\'s been a while. Keep it funny and all. I personally love it, and i think it should at least be finished.
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! A great story!
but as much as i love it, it has a couple of drawbacks: I don\'t like feeling underestimated. I mean that, for example, it becomes fairly clear earlier in the story that Roy is her brother, and so with that \"twist\" at the end it sounds like a predictable movie. The same goes with the scars on Jason - it\'s clear who caused them; let alone that there is, at least I think so, just one logical explanation for Ed\'s pregnancy.
So my suggeston is just let some things be a little more vague to keep our curiosity.
Having said all that, I still love it and I can\'t wait for the moment Roy arrives. Please update!
^_^
but as much as i love it, it has a couple of drawbacks: I don\'t like feeling underestimated. I mean that, for example, it becomes fairly clear earlier in the story that Roy is her brother, and so with that \"twist\" at the end it sounds like a predictable movie. The same goes with the scars on Jason - it\'s clear who caused them; let alone that there is, at least I think so, just one logical explanation for Ed\'s pregnancy.
So my suggeston is just let some things be a little more vague to keep our curiosity.
Having said all that, I still love it and I can\'t wait for the moment Roy arrives. Please update!
^_^
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please!
I love Roy but I\'m waiting for him to get the crap beaten out of him...tehe...!
I love Roy but I\'m waiting for him to get the crap beaten out of him...tehe...!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I am so glad you took up this challenge...I can\'t believe people WOULDN\'T take up this challenge ;)
Wow! I love your story! The end of chapter 4 was sad...wishing Nicholas could see something, too! And, I LIKE NICHOLAS! Keep him, keep him! =) Can\'t wait for more...::squee:: Can\'t wait to see what Roy\'s going to say to Ed...muhahaha Much angst to come, right? And I love your humor in here...and if there isn\'t, then I must be really sick, hehe ;) =)
GREAT STORY! 5 stars! A++!
Wow! I love your story! The end of chapter 4 was sad...wishing Nicholas could see something, too! And, I LIKE NICHOLAS! Keep him, keep him! =) Can\'t wait for more...::squee:: Can\'t wait to see what Roy\'s going to say to Ed...muhahaha Much angst to come, right? And I love your humor in here...and if there isn\'t, then I must be really sick, hehe ;) =)
GREAT STORY! 5 stars! A++!
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June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man! Very good so far, I\'d say ^^
The whole pregnancy thing is just ... well, I just want to know how!!!! Tell me!! Please, write some more soon.
And Roys reaction to Ed\'s state should be interesting too. I\'ll be waiting for more.
The whole pregnancy thing is just ... well, I just want to know how!!!! Tell me!! Please, write some more soon.
And Roys reaction to Ed\'s state should be interesting too. I\'ll be waiting for more.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grr..If you don\'t update immediately I\'m gonna kick your ass!! This story is so good.. I really can\'t wait any longer!! :DD love it <3
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nicolas is cool ^.^ update when you can!!