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You said her name was Grovewood in previous chapters.

Hughes is dead. Ya, that\'s right he\'s dead. Didn\'t you know that? You knew about homunculae. Oh, and this is very dark and disturbing. Just try not to kill too many people, okay?

sure, leave us hanging why don\'t you?? update!! great chapter!! especially that havoc scene b/c of the embarrassment. just nicely done

OH MAN YOU CANT NOT...I REPEAT...CAN NOT LEAVE ME HANGIN LIKE THIS!!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE. IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. I HAVE TO KNOOOOOOWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!

What did they find!!!!! Please hurry with the next chapter!! I can\'t wait to read more! :)

oh man, you have got to hurry and update, ur killing me here. This is the absolute best FMA fic i have ever read in my entire life. Please update soon.

AGH! soo good! dangit, I hope this ends as good at it starts. Ed is a little bit OOC, but that\'s okay it fits with the story. and I\'ve got a pretty good idea of where things are going, but if I\'m wrong even better!

5/5 baby! and two thumbs up!

Ehhhhhhh? I\'m confused @.X How can Woodgrove be the kidnapper? When Ed first saw her, he said that her hair and eyes were light brown...but you had roy describe her as having dark brown hair and gold eyes...but everything else fits, even how she started to say \'Marcus\' but ended up saying \'my son\'...but I\'m still confused about that last scene in the alleyway, she did turn out to be the crazy woman, right? I\'m not sure if I\'m making the detective into the kidnapper when that\'s not what you were writing....x__X;;; Also, I hate to sound nitpicky, but you keep spelling Colonel as \'Cornel\'. And hmm, I don\'t think Ed would have been so submissive and \'yes ma\'am\'-ish. I think he\'s more the type to react with anger, rather than fear, even when it would be better to do the opposite. I guess you need him that way for the story to work, but I think it\'sOOC.

Ok, I sound like I\'m doing nothing but complaining so I want to say that I do really like this story. It\'s different from most FMA fics and it\'s interesting, I really hope you write more! Just thought I\'d offer a little constructive criticism. I hope I don\'t sound mean or anything >.>;;; Err...WRITE MORE *skitters away before she upsets anyone*

i don\'t know if you\'re doing it on purpose but sometimes you write grovewood instead of woodgrove.... is it supposed to be like that? Can\'t wait to see what happens. Poor Ed and Havoc... ^_^

Great chatper! I can\'t wait to read more!! Plesae hurry with the next chapter!!! :)