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Wow... Umm... that\'s some deep deep stuff to say the least. I\'m curious about how long it took you to research all of that information. I find it very interesting myself and it definitely gets me thinking which is one of the greater things I\'ve noticed about your particular style of writing.

Also, I would just like to forewarn anyone that might have a tendency towards flaming this, I will get you ten fold and I will enjoy doing it. hahaha... So let\'s all just be respectful adults and play nice.

Very unique so far.. bravo

I\'m christian myself, and this was a interesting fic. I find it weird christianity surronding DBZ.

Nice lemon there, was kinda hoping for some Goten/Trunks action but Geen Eyes seemed to fit in well enough. I like the idea of a term paper that brings up the issue instead of having Bulma rant at him like ChiChi started to. It gives him an opening to explore not only christianity but other religions as well. Great job.

~patiently waiting for more~

Hmmmm.... Okay, where to start. *winks* Sodom was a very good name for the club. I am certian you knew that already, but I wish to go into detail. Sodom is the other half of Gamora (sp?) in the bible. A very good refrence. It is also the origin of the word, Sodomy. Very nice.

I learned a new word! (I love doing that) Mawkish. *nods* Thank you.

Mmmm, interesting lemon, especially with this being Trunks\'s first time.

I am glad you went into some detail about Trunks talking to Vegeta about \'Higher Beingings\'. I was very interested in Vegeta\'s outlook.

Goku\'s out reaction to what Chichi was \'preaching\' was interesting. I wasn\'t quite certain where he would lay his... aliances. (again, sorry about the spelling)

was the reference at the bottom something Trunks was thinking, or something you added as sort of an author\'s note?

I appologise if my views were taken the wrong way but in answer to Deepoet\'s comment about \"God and Devil\" stuff in other fics it doesn\'t matter to me if the fic is religion oriented. I have been given the speech that Bulma stared to give Trunks several times and ussually after someone found out that I am pagan. So the presentation of the idea of \"god\" to Trunks set my teeth on edge and I responded accordingly. I do not think that I was rude~though if I was I do appologise~ only giving my take on having heard the \"speech\" myself. I agree with Macha, perhaps you should bring Vegeta and have him tell Trunks about the religions of their home world.


Good Day.

Ah, it looks as though you have picked a very contriversial subject indeed. I am very interested in seeing where this is going. For a couple of reasons. First of all, it seems as though Bulma has been converted, not Trunks, and I want to know if she is going to try to convert Trunks and her reasons behind doing so and Trunks\'s reactions to it. Her statement about (paraphrasing) needing to find Jesus before for it\'s too late, makes it very.... human. Two, sayians are not of this planet, therefore Christianity would be very alien to them. Almost as alien as say.... Christianity was to the Celts in 200 AD.

Would this be a matter of Vegeta not enlighting his son as to the religions on Vegeta-sie and therefore Trunks finds his need for religion fulfilled by a human one?

lol... with what you have started here, Trunks could be the anti-christ for all I know.

Yes, I have to admit, just the title sets my teeth on edge, but the subject matter so far is good and interesting enough that I would like to read the second chapter.

A couple of things I want to point out.... only because this story WILL get picked on, even for the smallest infraction. You swapped tenses a couple of times, going from past tense to present tense. The one that comes to mind is where Trunks says something about \'sit\' instead of \'sat.\' Keep it the same tense through out the story if at all possible. Tenses are an issue I also have problems with, and personally, I really appreciate it when someone points it out to me, so I can fix it.

You have my email address. *winks*

Are you serious?...I thought this story was good, it was beautifully written and it had a few good points. I can understand vegeta\'s mates\' point about it if it revolves around revelations, but what about all the other fics with \'God and Devil\' stuff in it? I say give this story a little more time. I don\'t know about you but I can\'t just lay everything out on the line based on the first chapter.

Hello there. Um, I\'m not too sure about this but I don\'t think that you will end up getting many readers or reviews for this story. Let me explain my reasons before you send me hate mail.

#1. This story seems to be starting out with a good idea but the way it is portaeyed will send readers away because it seems that the author is trying to force them to think about something that either they really don\'t want to or don\'t care about.

#2. Very good point that many christians need to practice their beliefs instead of hiding behind them ~not saying that you do but that some do~

#3. I understand that for the majority of people, christianity is the way to go but not for everyone. The way that this story is heading seems to be a bit one sided, \'if you don\'t know about God then you are wrong\' seems to be the way this fic is going. I might be wrong but it is just my opinion.

#4. Instead of making this fic about \"Trunks finding God\" in the christian way maybe you should have him look over many different religions and decide which one fits him instead of making him conform to one. After all, in Japan there are mostly Buddhists and Shintos.

These have been just my opinion and if you feel like I flamed you then please feel free to e-mail me and talk to me about it. This is not an invitation to start text bashing my mailbox, this is an invitation to talk to me like an adult ~we are all supposed to be adults here~ and discuss a problem if one should arise.

Have a nice day.

Vegeta\'s Mate