rate_review Reviews

Wow....... Update soon!!!!!!!

That\'s not right. You have five reviews? Five? I\'m not happy with that at all. That is unacceptable. I\'m sure that more people liked it. Your story (and the other one you wrote) tourments me and I have to know how it will end. Goku\'s (or Kuroichi, whatever) pain is hurting me and Goten is sad and I\'m pissed at everybody else. You have to finish it or I\'ll cry. Please? with a cherry on top?

wah? why did vegeta beat goku up? did he really beat him up because he went out without permission? Or did vegeta freaked out because he thought goku left to kill himself and violent is the only way he kno how to express his worry?

This was an amazing story! I usually find these type of stories a little boring but this one had me reading it to the end. Very good job!

so, when are you going to give us the next chapter? soon right? good.

awesome! can\'t wait until the next update?