rate_review Reviews

More? Yes. More good! Loved the fact that there was Plot.

i loved and I would love a sequel! It was a nice story ^_^

Ehehe, you are good at this. It was cute. I enjoyed it muchly. ^_^

love the story. The interaction between roy and ed is amusing and shows the rather \'brutal\' friendship those too would most likly have. I also liked how you allowed ed to act foolish like a normal teenager would while still keeping up with the fact that he\'s way above most in the brains, fighting, and alchemy department. Most people either have him act like a 3 year old brat or some bookworm...it\'s nice to see a believable mix of the two.


oh....and that spanking comment made me happy...even if it was just a passing thought roy had.

Anyways, I\'ll be looking forward to more.

Loved the whole battle between them and I can\'t wait to see what will happen next. Great job keep them coming ^_^

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!!!!!!

I am loving it. I am laughing still. can\'t wait to read more. ^_^

Oh hell yeah! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. It\'s gonna be cool. ^_^ Please update soon.

Yay! This is neat so far. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter, which I hope will have lemony-goodness.

Ha Ha, Ed on spinners and telling Roy that the tape measure he was holding wasnt long enough to measure his wanky woo. Roy knows he was about to cream himself when he heard that. That\'s why he didnt want Ed to kick him. He didnt want his skeet to leak! AHAHAHAHAHA....cant wait for the sex. Great job!