rate_review Reviews

Just started reading your fic today and i gave to say that i think it\'s great.
I simply lover the sex scenes and you portray the charectors really well.
The fighting was so funny. Max and his \'shiner\' lol.
Looking forward to the next chappie

........Tala\'s stupid (Tala fans: HEEEEYYYY!!!!) - _ -U, okay he isn\'t but Hilary must be really scary if she can scare Tala. Hehe, i like this Hilary but than again she really is like that at G Rev. Anyways I LOVE THIS STORY, I THINK I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!!!! I hope you update soon....I\'ll wait patiently (destroying things as to get rid of impatience) can\'t wait until the next chapter. ^ ___ ^

........Tala\'s stupid (Tala fans: HEEEEYYYY!!!!) - _ -U, okay he isn\'t but Hilary must be really scary if she can scare Tala. Hehe, i like this Hilary but than again she really is like that at G Rev. Anyways I LOVE THIS STORY, I THINK I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT!!!! I hope you update soon....I\'ll wait patiently (destroying things as to get rid of impatience) can\'t wait until the next chapter. ^ ___ ^

Finally a update. But a great update. Can i sense a little bit of jealously coming from Tyson?

This is getting better and better. The on-top position moment was just amazing it had me drooling.
Kepp up the good work and update soon. Please!

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ok love we are having the fight strarting up
my my tyson beeing jeles whats next and kai his so respect full das not take any advantages lol
grate chapters keep it up and update soon

Yeah, you added more to the last chapter!!! Can\'t wait till next chap, hope you update soon!!! ^ _ ^

thats great hope u keep going ^^

Hilary is more responsive now isn\'t she? Kai is so fine!