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oh the evil deeds of cliffhangers...


did you know I spent HOURS on this?? Thinking you already updated... Come on! They got be together! And I want to read more of they together, in love and happy.

PS: mail me when you updated jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com

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CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!


contact me when this crisis' over so I can finish reading this amazing fic ^^ jubblesbubbles@hotmail.com

I'm loving the story thus far. PLease get the next chapter and e-mail me when you do. You're doing a nice job so keep on going.

I'm so glad that you updated! This has been an awesome story, and I'm excited to see how you'll end it, though I am also sad to see it end. Anywho, I hope you post the final chapter soon!

PLEASE give me the next chapter! I am dying without it.

Oh my God. This fic is just amazing. I almot nevr read DB fiction but after taht one I seriously need to reconsider.
Can´t wait for the next (last?) chapter

I was VERY excited to see that you had updated! I thought that the whole bit with Trunks throwing his wedding ring (that he miraculously got back in that last chapter?) at Gohan at the end of his fight with Goku was a little soap opera-ish... However! I really liked the fact that you paralleled Goku and Gohan's fight with Gohan and Trunks' fight. Gohan all angry and pissy with his dad and taking it out on him violently, just as Trunks did with Gohan. Nice touch. Um, let's see, Vegeta was pretty kickass, even though he really didn't do anything. He was still quite badass, in a sort of quiet, confident way that sums up everything that Vegeta is. I'm intrigued by the cliffhanger, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Now back to the real world in which Rayne has a geology presentation at 10 tomorrow morning... *agony*

wow, i had passed this up cause i didn't think i'd like it but once i broke down and started reading it i loved it. and i can't wait for the last chapter.

YAY!!!! You're BACK!!!!! WHOOOOOOT!

Okay, this chapter is so ANGSTY!!! I had to start back a couple of chapters, so please forgive me if I review things from past chapters instead of this one.

Goku took the blast head on? Dang...

It's too bad Gohan went so far before he realized what he was doing, and that Trunks didn't see the change of heart a split second before Gohan let the blast go.

I am glad that Gohan is doing better, but I am so shocked that despite this, Trunks still wants a divorce. Hmmmmm, I guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to see how this goes.

Hey, I hope you haven\'t given up on this story! I know that this site has been all weird lately, but I haven\'t forgotten about this fic!