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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that i love this fic. Also that if you dont update imediatly i promise i will hunt u down and kill you. I\'ll hunt u down and make sure that u wished and prayed to god that you finished/update one of the best fic i have ever read for what u\'ve written. so update asap please because i would really dislike gettin blood on my new shoes.
UPDATE NOW!!!!
Cheers
Draco Amora
UPDATE NOW!!!!
Cheers
Draco Amora
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! U HAVE TO UPDATE LIKE NOW! PLEASE I CAN\'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A bit late, I know, with this review, but...you know...life... ^^ Anyway, I\'m here now and am EXTREMELY pleased to see this new chapter up. I had almost thought you were going to put this fic on hiatus. Anyway, nice conveyance of tension between Gohan and Goku. I can\'t wait until they fight. AND I want to know what all this business is with Vegeta asking for Trunks\' hand. *smile* I can\'t wait for more chapters!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost died when I saw that you updated! i\'ve been checking back almost everyday! I hope the next chap comes out soon. This one was great!
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEp! I had forgotten they were going to the tournament. Wow, lots of tention at the ring. The poster booth certainly didn\'t help. :(
You did an excellent job in writing everyone\'s immediate emotions. Made me feel uncomfortable, and I am not even there.
Nice job, hope to see more soon. :) Cause that\'d mean everything on your end in RL is good!
You did an excellent job in writing everyone\'s immediate emotions. Made me feel uncomfortable, and I am not even there.
Nice job, hope to see more soon. :) Cause that\'d mean everything on your end in RL is good!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo hoo, awesome chapter! I think the pacing is a lot better than the last chapter, too. I really can\'t wait to see what happens next, with the fight between Gohan and Goku, and the other loose ends with his estranged loved ones. It seems like it\'s all headed for a very emotionally charged conclusion. Yay, do update soon!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate seeing Gohan and Goku hate each other! It\'s not normal! And I hope Trunks kicks Vegeta\'s ass! lol UPDATE SOON!!!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!
Gohan is slowly overcoming his rage. But things are looking up.
It looks like Gohan gained some \'brownie points\' in Vegeta\'s favor.
Looking forward to more when you have the time. ;)
Gohan is slowly overcoming his rage. But things are looking up.
It looks like Gohan gained some \'brownie points\' in Vegeta\'s favor.
Looking forward to more when you have the time. ;)
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh, I thought I already reviewed this latest chapter! Anywho, I hope you continue writing this. I must know what happens next!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading the 15 chapters currently posted, and I am in love with this story. I love the detail you have put in. I have found myself crying at times. It was brilliantly written. I am \"On the edge of my seat\" as they say. I NEED to know what happens next. Please update soon!
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