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Good chapter. Loved the scene when Goku came to visit, you have no idea how much my heart went out to him in that moment! I liked when Trunks and Gohan went to that hill, very symbolic with how Trunks had memories of his other Gohan there, and how he thought he had lost him once before, and didn\'t want to throw the chance away of having him forever.

But towards the middle of the chapter, I felt things were beginning to come across as \'rushed\'. I\'m not sure if that\'s how you really wanted it to come across, or if you were just having an off day while writing. I wanted to see what happened at their one day engagement and wedding, and wanted more of a detailed scene between Trunks telling his father and mother about the marriage. The way you wrote it, the marriage came across as almost a casual thing to happen. I dunno, I just felt that something was missing...

I am intruiged to see what Jack has planned though. I had a feeling he would come back into the picture. And for the most part, I\'m glad he\'s come back. It keeps the story line even more interesting than it already is.

*sniff* Poor Goku! Damnit Gohan! Forget the grudge and forgive Goku!

Wow. Every chapter I am even more impressed. It\'s so well thought out. Chapter 14...that lemon...wow. O_O I mean, wow. Ah, the very IDEA of a dominant and commanding Mirai Trunks just turns me on! ^o^ And they got married! That\'s so sweet! And how Gohan proposed on the hill where Trunks had buried him in his own timeline--very nice touch. Like the cycle of life and death, you know? Anyway, the sheer EMOTION in these last two chapters was fabulous. Gohan\'s emotions have been the most interesting to see grow over the course of the story. It\'s nice that he\'s willing to meet with Trunks\' family, but at the same time he still harbors this insane anger for Goku. It shows how dimensional he is. But hopefully he\'ll get to a point where he can be on normal terms with his father (although I\'m a sucker for drama ^^). I love how you\'ve charaterized everyone in this story (*sigh* Trunks... *dribbles*). I wish this fic could go on forever though...^_^ Even so, I look forward to the few remaining chapters!

Woo hoo, I really liked this chapter! Dominant Trunks = HOT. Keep it coming!

Good chapter!! But I have an excellent idea! But before i tell you, I want you to know that i am not a sadist! This idea may just bring out a huge interesting twist in the story! Anyways... what if one of the perverts who like Gohan decide to drug Trunks and..well...F@#K him and use him against Gohan. Therefore, they get to have Gohan all to themselves... I know it sounds wrong but the idea wuz just screaming to be let out! OR... one of the faggots who like Trunks could do the same thing to Gohan OR they could just drug Trunks and kidnap him and do *things* to him. UPDATE SOON PEZE!!!

oooooo nice fic so far.I cant wait for the other chappies ^^ I have printed up your fic and it is awesome. I read it occasionally.

This story is amazing.. please keep writing.. I hope Trunks and Gohan will get back together so please update soon! Your definately the best writer i have read on aff please keep adding to this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uhh...wow. What a strange, interesting, and surprisingly good story! I say \"surprisingly\" because of the premise...I mean, my sweet little Gohan, a stripper and a slut?! Ha! Away with you! But you\'ve really made it work. In fact, I did cry during that Piccolo scene. Gah! Loved that part, by the way, took me by surprise, but it was just like Piccolo to come rescue him from the evil old man! Anywho, I can\'t wait to read more!

please please please please please please please update asap! i love it!

YOU ARE AN EVIL PERSON!! POOR TORANKSU!! GOHAN U FRIGGIN GAY FAG!! BURN IN HELL!! UPDATE SOON!!! This is gettin good!