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person ray fan
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
make a secuel to it
i want some ray kai action please
i love it
person xxHaruka
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this is really good and funny =) I love it, good job! =D
person ayane
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was really great. can you do a sequal to this story or continue cause i really really liked it
person brittany
schedule February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUNNY!! kai had such a foul mouth! i loved it! update if you can think of another chapter.
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure if i reviewed this before but this is always nice to read!!! XD CX
person Liah
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol that was so amusing! especially with chibi kai hitting on ray! lol...
and the ending was even funnier \'you have a nice ass!\' - i bet rei doesnt hear that everyday lol!
Liah xx
person phoenixandashes... I\'m lazy >,<
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!
ROFL!
this is so FUNNY!

Kai: o.O Okaaay... seems she can\'t say anymore, she\'s laughing to hard. Was I really that bad as a kid?
Tala: Probably.

person Virpi
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl rofl
Okay that\'s enough. It was goooooood! You really, REALLY should do a sequel to this...
person Padfootlet
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* omg...it awesome ^^ AI SHITERU AI SHITERU!!! I love it ^^ it\'s so cute lol...and hilarious...hehehehe....funny thing is I can actually see all that happening O.o;;;
lol...anyway...awesome job...AND DON\'T FORGET TO UPDATE INNOCENT DANCE!!! *throws you Kai and Rei plushies*
person Raichan
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD.HAHAHA.*gasp* I...hahaha..can\'t stop laughing.Hahaha.This is absolutely HILARIOUS.Wish you could write another chapter or a sequel.Love this fic so so much.You really gotta make another one or something.

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