rate_review Reviews

really really good story. I would love to see another chapter. ^_^

\"Hughes unzipped his own pants and pulled them down, along with his shorts, to free the huge beast trapped in the zippered caged.\" THat was funny shit.

Maes and Roy all the way ^^
Just be careful about switching tenses...you were using present and past tense together and it got slightly confusing. And I agree with the other reviewer who said that whiskey would not have acted as a good lubricant. Apart from that, though, I enjoyed the story.

0,0’ That was really hot! *crosses legs* Wahhooo!! You did a really good job with the emotions and the hot loving between the two sexy men. Did I mention that was hot?? Nicely done!! *turns fan up*

loved the beginning, and the characterization was good. Confession and realization seemed a bit abrupt, but that\'s to be expected in this genre. Only complaint: whiskey is not appreciably thicker or slicker than water, and it has alcohol in it. Thus, I wince to think of the inevitable stretching and tearing that occurs in a first time. Then I think of rubbing alcohol applied to childhood knee scrapes. And I shudder.

Beautiful story! Write more! Write more please! It\'s great!

I really liked this story! Is this your first story? It is, isn\'t it? I didn\'t read the summary because I saw Hughes x Roy and I immediately clicked lol. But, like I was saying, it was very descriptive and... well... I LOVE IT! I\'m surprised no other people reviewed this yet but shame on them: I get first review.

I say keep at it! I really look forward to more stories from you, especially in this genre. Kudos to you!

Good luck!

-Fake