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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a realy good story, plaese make a second chapter for me
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July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice!
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great beginning, with goten and chi chi moving in with bulma and trunks, wonder wat happens next chapter so please write it soon and more chapters after it fast
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great! i loved it!
write one with mr satan and videl!
satan is the father of pan!
write one with mr satan and videl!
satan is the father of pan!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! trunks is such a pervert!!!
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April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome beginning u really need to keep making a continuation of these a lot more, do them soon, please
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March 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE NEXT CHAPPY!
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March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How come the title says Bulma and Trunks when it turns out to be ChiChi and Trunks.. also.. it sucks. Big time. Yes i know it was a childish remark I just made but oh so true. this is a childish peice of writing and sounds like something a pre-teen would write without kowing anything about description or realism.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm, I think you forgot the incest warning in the summary too.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Let the nude olympics begin. I want to see both couples get it on in the next chapter.