schedule
March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*laughs hysterically* Pretty good for your first PWP!!!! ^^ I demand more!!!!
schedule
March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh. Kinky! Settled into my perverted mind very well, thank you very much!
Only one thing to suggest, your tenses changed quite often. *shrugs* but not enough to distract me from reading it.
And I was Soooo certain that Goku had been the telemarketer. Ah well.
Only one thing to suggest, your tenses changed quite often. *shrugs* but not enough to distract me from reading it.
And I was Soooo certain that Goku had been the telemarketer. Ah well.
schedule
March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinky, cute, and comedic. It\'s hard to type now because I keep giggling like an idiot. Great job.
~Yuurei~
~Yuurei~
schedule
March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was kinky and to think it all start with a telemarketer and they say telemarketer are bad.