rate_review Reviews

I was about to die at the end. That was hot and so funny at the same time. God, the end really had me going, I almost cried at how hot it was. Please do write more, make a real, long g/v fic next time, please!

this was very funny!

When I got to the last few lines, I laughed so hard I nearly hit my head on the desk! \'Twas fabulous!

This is too good to be a one-shot. You definitely should writ more... like, some days later, Goku suggesting they all play Truth or Dare, so that he can get another taste of Vegeta... ^_^

Oh god...my sides ache from laughing so hard. Too much...I loved it. You\'ve got a flare for comedy. Great job.

~Yuurei~

OH, I am soooo happy you said this was suppose to be a comedy fic, cause if
it hadn\'t of been I would have been a shamed of myself for laughing. At
Piccolo\'s expense for the most part. hehe

Okay, where to begin. First of all, Bulma IS a GENIUS. *nods* A beautiful
one. I do believe only that combination is what got the guys to play in the
first place: for just a chance they may be able to kiss her.

Back to the Bulma is a genius part, I know she planned it so SOMEHOW so
Vegeta would get involved. *nods* I think she really wanted to kiss him,
but got more than she bargined for. *nods* Lucky girl!!!

(Hmmm, or is it really Goku who is the genius, playing the game he knows
Bulma is using to manipulate Vegeta, to get to the Prince himself.)

OH, two hot sayians really into a kiss that isn\'t \'suppose\' to be. *drools
and then faints*

*big ass cheesy grin* I liked it!!! Woo!!! Nice one!!! More soon, okay?