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for The Odd Couple

by janaleigh

person chayron
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The most imprinted in my memory is that damned tomato-soup can. I almost pissed my pants laughing.

Don’t know how I missed this story, but it’s a hell of a read and work. You describe people, events surroundings so comprehensively that I almost felt living in the same tent as Goku and Vegeta (I wish… *sighs*).

It’s a wonderful story. I just wonder if Goku and Vegeta are really going to stay here. Did they really left Earth for good? Sure, they didn’t see any point in staying on Earth, wanted some sparkle in their life, but still… Well, I suppose they have a spaceship, and if there’s still some fuel left, they could simply visit their relatives from time to time.

Waiting for update!
person wendyghost
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! loved it!
person Kelly
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry and update! I am eagerly awaiting more!
person Kelly
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was amazing! I never read a fic where Goku and Vegeta were seme. That was by far the best fic I\'ve read yet, and I can\'t wait untill you update. Yeah that was great... that was an understatement!
person Macha
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY, Goku is alive. *phew* But I am having some concerns about the synthetic senzu. It seems that it\'s not the same, and I am hoping it won\'t have any lasting adverse affects on Goku (such as him not being able to power up to SSJ, let alone SSJ3)

and another YAY, for Vegeta and Goku getting back together. *hums happily* It would take something as frightening as that to get Vegeta to admit his feelings for Goku to himself, and then to show them to Goku.


Ah, another well written chapter.
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAAY! LEMON NEXT CHAP!!! WOOT!
person kit-kit
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kakarott has been killed now vegeta and goku can live in peace.
person Kugatsu
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT! you are evil! i love your action scene! Wooo! I could feel the intensity! it was great! Wooo! Ithought you had killed my goku, girl i was gonna tear you to bits but you brought him back! i love ya! keep it up!
person Kugatsu
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHOA! DEAD GOKU?! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
person Cardinal
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WWWHHHAATTT?!

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