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by janaleigh

person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O

*goes insane* What the???? Mehehfklnhkxsc!mhkdfcvhn!!!! *dies*
person Macha
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


Um... as for the rest of the chapter. I feel so bad for Goku and Vegeta, with Vegeta making the decisioni to keep his distance.

I do like the fact the sayians now have projects going on that are going to unite them as a people, but keep them independant as a nation.

Great chapter, but you had better update soon. That was just the most evil cliff hanger ever.
person kit-kit
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i hope goku doesn\'t die or anything.
person Anon
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story I cant wait to see how it pans out, up date soon!!! please!!!
person The Chichi Slaughter House
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn\'t know you\'d updated!!!! How sad!!! Full of action and angst... poor Vegeta...losing your dreams and wants is a terrible thing...
person Kugatsu
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great...Man you gotta continue that was a great fight now just --descriptive the tension the rage, everything!

Please, continue!
person Cardinal
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I have never read a story so good!! You depict Vegeta
and Goku\'s personalities so perfectly that I feel as if it truly happened on the
show! LOL! Great job! Please udpate soon!!

~Cardinal
Author of \"Come With Me\"
person kit-kit
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow great fight scene i loved it.
person Webtester01
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was an awesome confrontation.

Vegeta has some serious thinking to do.

Great Job! Keep it up.

~Webtester01~
person Diabolus
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update! It\'s really sad though :( poor Goku! I hope you update soon. I\'m really looking forward to the next chapter!

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