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AAHH! LOL You have to update soon soon soon!! NOw nOW NOW!

another great chapter i can\'t wait to see where you take the next chapter especially since vegeta is ready to take over by force.

This fic is beautiful. I really loved this, the way it was written and its plot. You have a wonderful style of writing and an amazing imagination to make such a good and in depth plot like this.

I must commend you on how you made all of the Saiyan clans and the whole idea behind another version of the planet; the Kakarotto was a good idea too.

Your sex scenes were also very beautiful. The only disappointment I had was the fact neither of them said that they loved eachother :( I was waiting for it but it never came! Maybe this isn\'t finished yet? I hope you continue this if you were planning to, as it\'s fantastic and can develop even further into a great story. I am adding this straight to my recommended reading!

another great chapter i love the lemon it was kinky as always and i loved the beat down that kakarott took.

OMG NOOO!!! YOU CAN\'T CUT ME OFF LIKE THAT! *DIES*

oooohh i just want to beat kakarott down for calling goku a slut.

another kinky lemon i can\'t believe the women were hitting on goku even though they know who he belongs to.

great chapter i see they got caught though i know it wont be a problem.

Oh. My. Fucking. God. Was that steamy! Jesus, can you write!

Goku\'s shifting opinions of the tuffles / sayajin war was quite facinating, as well as Vegeta throughout the entire epic. Yay for sexy-angsty, dominating, affectionate, philisophical, carnal, seme vegeta! Yeah!

excellent excellent excellent, but do use hell instead of that american censor enforeced crap...
it must continue!