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a great kinky chapter i can\'t wait for the next chapter

I hate doing this because i don\'t want to inflate the number of reviews, but the last review had me concerned so I just want to clarify. In error, I had posted chapter 8 twice. Instead of chapter 7 then chapter 8, I posted chapter 8 and chapter 8. Really, really sorry about that. Especially since a lot of important stuff is revealed in chapter 7 and I know that some of you read 8 before you got a chance to read 7. So, for anyone that missed chapter 7 the first time around, go back and read it. It is important. LOL Ok? The last review said chapter 8 was the same chapter, I\'m hoping thats not because you had read chapter 8 and thought it was chapter 7, then when you saw 8 again, thought that was the repeat chapter -- when really, you missed chapter 7. Am I completely confusing everyone????

Bottom line, chapters are fixed! And I will post chapter 9 tomorrow. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing, folks!!

Jana (dharmaserenity)

Just so you know, chapter 8 is the same as chapter 7....^^;;

Uhh just so you know...chapters 7 and 8 are the same...^_^U
They have different titles but the content is the same. By the
way I am absolutely LOVING your fic. It so effin rocks. KEEP
WRITING! You are a great writer my dear =D. The yaoi
chapter was...oh em geeeeeeee! It was off the HOOK dude!
VERY well written indeed! I heart you! <3

I love this story, but I think that the last two chapters are the same. PLEASE fix this so I can continue reading your fabulous story!

great chapter i also found your story on the templeofthegoddess.com and i liked it alot at least what you have so far and i can\'t wait for you to catch up to chapter 12 and write chapter 13.

Damnit! Why can\'t they just stay together for once and get all the foreplay fighting overwith? XD Looking forward to the next chapter, Ja ne!

great chapter though for a minute i thought that vegeta was mad at goku but im glad he isn\'t and that they finally had sex.

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good chapter im glad that vegeta killed those creatures otherwise if he didn\'t i would have. the last part with the \"hi\" thing before they kissed was so cute now im just hoping for a lemon.