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for The First Time

by immatureimp

schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Unbelievable

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just plainly perfect! You even brought tears to my eyes with a fic of such sheer magnificent! The choices of words... the antagonism between Videl and Trunks, wheter one is frail, sweet, loveable, slow, the other is strong, hard, fast and equally sweet tasteful.

Seriously, this was my favorite fic, DBZ fandom, but, alas, it enters my top 20 easily ^~
person rikko
schedule July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning! What's next?
person Chrysler
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"The first time Gohan fell in love with a man, it punched him in the face. Literally. He never saw it coming." ....Lol, it started all sweet with Videl and then Trunk's just blew the lovey dovey shit right out the window! I love it! I was picturing Vegeta the entire time in Trunk's part, and I wasn't complaining. Far from it. I love how much bearing Vegeta has over his son and what Trunks and Gohan have going on is hawt!!! Glad that one lasted forever. Good fic!
person zeynel
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! ^^
person victoria
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like that love to see more storys like thsi
person Camaro
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a little confused by this.. was it a summary leading into a story or just kind of an story idea? It seemed a bit detached to me though I thought it was sensable... very little emotion though.. hm.. your style changes a lot huh? haha

Camaro
person Macha
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Is this a one shot or is it going somewhere?

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