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Hmmm. Interesting idea.

Very interesting....definitely my cup of tea...can\'t wait to read more!!!

A mystery and a conspiracy!!!!

Update Soon!!!

Seein poor Goten sad is heart wrenching! He\'s so bubbly and full of life! At least Trunks is being a good friend! UPDATE SOON!!!

~scratches chin, speaks with a thick German accent~ Very Interesting..... ~speaks normally~ UPDATE SOON! I gotta know what the boys do!

NICE! A great piece of work. I usually don\'t read vamp fics cause they seem sooooo cliché... but this! Amazing! *takes deep breath* I love the smell of originality.

Hey, so pleased that I inspired a story! I like it. I love Vegeta, I love vampires, it\'s all good. I don\'t like the idea of them doing as the special forces tell them to, Vegeta should just kill that guy! But I guess he doesn\'t do that any more (at least not in the open....) I feel so sorry for Goten and I like the way you portray Bulma as an alright person. Sometimes I end up killing her off or turning her into a total bitch without meaning to, oh well. And it\'s cool the way there\'s so much going on, although I think you could afford to put a little more detail in on the events like how they\'re coping with Roshi\'s death and stuff. It\'s cool that Goku\'s due to go into heat soon, does Vegeta know? Anyway, just to let you know I like it. My reviews are sparse at the moment because my internet is playing up and I have two exams in a week, but keep up the good work!

chapter 5

Wow, that is so awsome!!! I am so simple minded. I don\'t realize they can use the DNA sample to do stuff until Bulma mention it at the end...(nod nod) I thought it was just for some test..O.o so many intruguing things are set in motion here! military power...science experment with their sample...this is going to be aweome!

I can\'t wait til I see more!!!

aaaaaaaw poor thing. At least it looks like Goten is finding some comfort in Trunks

Thanks for the update, cant wait for S\'more!

Wow...is this chapter written for me??? You\'re the best! Special Trunk/Gotan moment!!! (huggle Web) I know I say this many time, but you really are the best! so nice of Trunk. He is so tired but he go and get Gotan donuts...Gotan is soo sad. (cries) This is a very wonderful chapter! Trunk/Gotan is my favorite pairing and you write them out sooo good! I hope Trunk make Gotan feels better!

This chapter warm my heart and make me smile!

please update soon!

Poor Goten!!! What happened with him?

Gero?! AAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh. Evil Bastard!