rate_review Reviews

Awww! I REALLY like this! It\'s so... uniquely written! Like everyone\'s perception from the view of a diary or something. How creative of you! I don\'t think I\'ve seen this style in... man, it has to be years since I\'ve seen it this way. Very original! Not to mention the storyline is very captivating as well. Sometimes I shy away from the vampire theme because it almost strikes me as if everyone kind of does the same take on it. You do not. Hahaha.. awesome

I\'d say email me when you update but I\'ve just recently gotten chewed out for that and informed that it\'s apparently \"ordering\" or something (damn people, learn the english language! haha) so I\'ll just say that I really have enjoyed this and I\'m going to be waiting for updates!

Camaro

Cool! I really like how things are shaping up. Poor Goten... but this is really interesting. C\'mon crank out the chapters! (I should get to cranking out my own chapters...^_^6) Anyway, update again soon.

wow, that realy good, i didnt get the consept at first, im so stupid :P and so is my story, it tottaly sucks, but i only got 1 reply....so, canu check it out and tell me what i need to improve the next chap.? its called \"danny-chan\'s story. thanx, bye!!!!

This is such a cool beginning. I love Vampire fic, and the mood you set for this beginning is one of the best Vampire fic I have seen. Great job! I like it a lot. Not too dark but a lot of nice family emotions....caring and worrying. Great beginning!

Another great chapter! I like this a lot. Bra sneaks out to see her boyfriend...and getting into trouble...I love the plot! I can\'t see what will happen next! and I got Goten and Trunk moment! Yay! did you put that in for me...

it was cute how he crushed to the side of the house, I giggled.

you\'r a very good writer!

wow, it just keep getting better! Goten is an alcholic? Mine! soo much is happening! I hope thing is gonna be okay with him. And I really really really really REALLLLLLYYYYYYYYYYY love vegata\'s dialog!!! LOL
I was laughing so hard!!! sparing????? punching kicking...lol I love the biting part too (I was thinking about the your other fics when they mark their mate?) and Gokuu is going somewhere? This is going to be another awsome fic! it rocks!

i feel bad for roshi...

Great development!

The plot thickens
*sits by his knees giving him puppy eyes 9.9* s\'more please

Who the heck would want to bite Roshi? EEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwww. hehe

I liked the POV\'s. Good information in Chichi\'s part about Goten and Bra being ex\'s. I had to laugh at Vegeta\'s reaction to the thought of Goku biting him. :)

I want more. ~holds out bowl~ That was very good. The changing of PoV was neat too. Thank you.

yep, very interesting. I like the way you are telling this story through several POV\'s.