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\"joyful night\" eh? :P

Aww bless tala-kun!!! getting so worked up about the girl. that was soooooooo cute ;p
Still lubbing this, just wish you wouldnt take so long to update ;p

Oh yea, what was said in the song?

X333, very nice!! It was so good!! This is why I need to learn from you... Mei: Like A LOT of things... Mel: XP Shud up!! Not my fault that I wasn\'t a good writer and never really paying attention in Language Arts class till this year...>.> Mei: Right...Well anyway, G-R-E-A-T job on the fic, it was much much better!! Mel: Hey I was gonna say that!!! Plus to add to that I finally had the time to read chapter three!! Yeah! Now need to start chapter four! Mei: And chapter two. Mel: ???? Mei: Of ur fic... Mel: Oh right that...well...yeah...um...BYE~! And good job on chapter three!!!! Mei: -_-;;;;

update

Mel: I finally made the time to read your fic!!! HURRAY!!!!!!!! Mei: But you didn\'t make the time to write UR fic. Mel: Shut up!!! I still have a project to finish!!! Then I\'ll be free from school\'s grasp for a VERY short while T-T. Mei: Ur just being lazy! Mel: NO I AM NOT!!!! Well anyway, chapter two was very nice, but I did see a few grammer errors, but besides that nothing wrong. It was SOOO elaborate and detailed especially when you describe the battles and the sunset. Mei: Sunset was pwitty (pretty)!!!!!! And and and it\'s really funny too! Mel: I agree with Mei there, so keep up the good work!!! On to next chapter!!! Hopefully I can finish it...

Mel: You did better this time, I really like it! Mei: Me too! Mel: Stop appearing out of nowhere! Mei: Well I want to review too! Mel: Too bad, this is MY computer. So I get to do what I want to do! XP Mei: Grrr...XPPPPPPP Mel: Well sorry for the RUDE interruption there. Mei: I was not being rude, I was being nice enough to comment! Mel: *ties Mei up in a closet somewhere* well anyway, I really like it so far. I hope you do this well later too, well anyway ON WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!

Awww no! >.< mean DD >.< MUSNT HURT KAI! BIG NO NO :p
lol
still going good^_^

and AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW tala!!! kissed the girl!!! so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!

How come mariah battled a duo twice?

i like this fic but u keep putting it on new chapter but there isnt its reli frustrating!!

NYA!! aww bless Tala-kun >.< squeee!!!!! so kawaii he is ^_^ ;p
liked very much... although its kinna.... long... reading the scottish accent... but still, thats goods a good add in ^_^
hope you can get the next one out sooner ^_^

NYA!!!! ^_^
loved this ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter...
poor iris *sniffle*...lucky also...getting kai ;p

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