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for Always A First Time

by debbiechan

schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
holy crap I wish Io bulma's nerve! DAMN!
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
aw man-frieza messed poor vegeta up something wiockled
no wonder then that he's so cold!
person Ara
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is sooooooo cooooooooool! It makes me wonder lots more what happened in those 3 years. Please finish it!
person tennyoakana
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES! IM" SO GLAD ANOTHER CHAPTER WAS ADDED YES YES! >< Finally!....can't tell you how long I've been waitig for it. Obessed arent' I?

>>;;; I hope there will be some lemon next...or even a tad bit of lime...

OKAY CAN"T WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!~!
person Anon
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? No! You can't leave it there! I love this story. The characters are perfect and the plot is wonderful. Please try to update as soon as possible. Great stuff!
person Tasha
schedule December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot!! an update!! Keep it up!! Hope you update soon, I love your story. I love it so much that when you updated it I went and reread all the chappies!! ^_^

It doesn't matter when you update, just as long as you do....Please? I love the way you get into the chars and everything. I hope soon you put a father and son moment in the story soon. tee hee ^_^

ok going before I get on your nerves.

Tootles.
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY *bounces around* She updated!!! And its a good update, but I need more! NOW!...................*puppy dog eyes* Please?
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! you updated!! *happy dances of snoopy joy*

ooh and a good chappie it is. I understand about the fic updating and what not, so long as you finish the story at some point I'll be happy.

Great ch, and good characterzation of egomaniac Vegeta!
person Pixelgoddess
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're back! *hugs* Vegeta's angry, confident plotting is such a wonderful thing. You totally capture his distaste for Goku with just a few words. I'm really worried about Wolfie's safety now - not because of Gero, but because of Vegeta. There is no telling what the prince will do when he finds him.
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!! Please, I\'m dying over here!

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