rate_review Reviews

I beg of you...for the love of god...UPDATE...I can\'t explain how much this story kicks ass. I feel as if this is what TRULY happened. How you use the anime for your writings is just...WOW....I had never read anything like this story before. And the fact that it hasn\'t been updating in OVER TWO MONTHS...ehem...is like someone taking a hot dagger and stabbing me over and over again...TORTURE!!!! >< Anyway I noticed you\'re writing for Bleach too...I prefer Rukia/Ichigo over Orihime/Ushida but they\'re still a good coupling. ^^ My point is...DON\"T FORGET THIS STORY WAH! If you update soon...I\'ll give you cookies...bye bye!

come on! I\'m dying over here! Update... PLEASE!!!! I can\'t wait any longer!

Never fear! I will continue this story! Been through a spell of unforseen stuff--illness, a fling with writing Bleach fiction, then Hurricane Katrina hit my city and we\'re currently housing refugees.

I have sooooo much planned for this fic when I get back to it! ^^

thanks for checking on it! dchan

omg!! please continue me must know how it ends!!! keep going evil vegeta bad bad bad bad bad!!!

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I am so hooked to this story. Excellent job. I love your style of writing.

Keep it coming! :)

-Michelle

this is so good!!! once again i am sorry for the lateness of my review!!! ^^;;

Yay! You updated.

Such a good chapter too. I have to give you a golden kudos for keeping Bulma strong. How many fics are out there with her pining over Vegeta? I like your take on her a hellva lot more, plus I think it\'s much much more realisitic.


Wonderful job!

I love this story! I read all twenty seven chapters in one sitting, go me! I love the way you write, it is so fluid and pleasant to read. I don\'t usually like it when it\'s cluttered with words,but yours just FLOWS. Vegeta and Bulma are SOO in character! I don\'t really think of this as a story of what MIGHT have happened in the three years, as far as I\'m concerened, this IS what happened. Keep writing beautifully, I love your work!!!

Girl, I\'m on the edge of my seat! arg, wish I could type more but I\'m all ready late for work! Great job!

I like your story very much. Actually its one of the best I read so far altough Bulma is a bit sex oriented for my taste. Vegeta\'s characterization is excellent. Please update. (sorry if my spelling isnt perfect. my english is kind of rusty) Media