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for Always A First Time

by debbiechan

person hopeless_angel1605
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great please write more soon
person bob
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww they\'re not back together yet but please continue i\'ve been waiting for this update!!
person tempest rojata
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I love how Bulma told that nurse off! That was great! Hehe, can\'t wait to see how Vegeta will react to his son once he gets a good look at that hair!
person moonlight shadow
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg!! this is great!!! please continue!!! ^^;; sorry about the latness in all my reviews my computer as been down *ack*ack*
person bob
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aw man when are vegeta and bulma gonna get back together it\'s killing me!!
person Pixelgoddess
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vegeta - he never seems to be able to get his balance. Everything seems to bewilder and confuse him, and he apparently lacks social skills. I\'ve always thought his anger and impatience is directed more at himself than others. Am I a bad person for saying I don\'t like Bulma? She wasn\'t my favorite person on the show and you are true to that character - but man, she was a bitch. :D I think that\'s why Vegeta is so good with her - he won\'t take her crap. Poor Yamcha - just a convenience. *snicker* Update or die! UR GR8 :P
person LadyRrain
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Wonderful story! I like that fact that it hold to the series so well.
I\'m wondering how the next chap will turn out. Oh please update soon!!
person makota
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! You\'re taking a break? nooooo!!!

*sigh*

Oh well, can\'t say I blame you but I\'ll be waiting with baited breath. Damn! I hate cliff hangers!

Great chapter as always, but I can\'t wait to see Vegeta\'s reaction (if there is one at all) once he finds out who the papa really is.

Kudos :)
person Tempest Rojata
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant has always. Although I\'m feeling a little.... empty.... I need MORE!!!!! I hope your update comes soon, I want to know whats going to happen next. Hows the birth going? Wheres Vegeta? How is he going to react? Ahhhh!! So many questions left unanswered!
person bob
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I luv the fic but when is Vegeta coming back? Update soon I\'m waiting!

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