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i\'m tunes to this story now for about two weeks and I simply have to say that this fic ROCKS!!!!! I love it! And I so look forward to reading how Vegeta reacts when he sees his son!!!LOL

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO I CAN\'T READ ANYMORE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE??? i MUST READ MROE WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Wow...........all I can say is wow...........this chapter was so beautifully written. You are a true talent to the fanfiction world. And the abuse of Vegeta in this chapter was so original, and so dark without being graphic. Standing Ovation to you!

Wow. Thats what Wow. I loved how you portrayed Vegeta in this, how deep he is, and the interesting twist of him leaning into Frieza! And Bulma, even pregnant this woman never stops her brilliance. I\'m on my toes, can\'t wait to see what happens next.

*sniffs* You made me cry with this chapter. I always see Vegeta as such a tragic hero - so much potential battered and destroyed by anger and hatred. He isn\'t really an introspective person, because to look at himself is to see an enemy and a stranger. He has had to lie to himself all of his life in order to survive, twisting and bending into warped images of what others want him to be or he thinks he should be. Does he ever ask himself what he should have/would have been if it hadn\'t been for his father and Frieza?

Your descriptions of the soul and heart-wrenching transformation made me ache for him. This isn\'t a Vegeta who lives, it is one who survives.

Thanks for writing chapters that make me think and ask questions - they are always my favorites.

Woo, lots of Vegeta angst in there, but well done. While I don\'t personally buy the whole sexual relationship between Frieza and Vegeta I think that Vegeta\'s reaction was very unique and quite intriguing. I\'m very curious as to where this line of thought is going...that is if you choose to take it further. However, while I think it\'s important to touch on Vegeta\'s past I think if it\'s focused on too much it becomes teidious especially as our proud Prince, heritage aside, strikes me as the type to focus on the present. But that\'s just me ;). Anyway, another great angsty chapter thanks for the update!

Bravo and more please! I can\'t wait to see and read what you have up next!

You know - I\'m not really sure what to say. You\'ve left me speechless. Vegeta trapped with himself has to be disturbing for him. You don\'t go into explicit detail, but with some very wide brush strokes you paint a picture of his fear and anger. He can\'t stop the pain, so he embraces it, making it a part of him to survive. He accepted Frieza because he had no choice and no escape. Now that he has Bulma there is a way out - but will he rationalize her as an alternative to pain or accept her as the removal of it.

That was a powerful chapter. Very well done, the details were done in such a way as that I could actually \'see\' the events in the chapter. I didn\'t get a chance to review the last chapter but as always that was great as well. You have me on the edge of my seat about Vegeta\'s reaction to the baby, whenever that will be.

I await the next installment with no small amount of anticipation.

aaaahhhhhh no no no no no!!! *gets on knees* you are so mean!!

onegai update soon

ONEGAI!!