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for Always A First Time

by debbiechan

person LadyWater
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How sad!! Poor prince! Please up-date soon and help my pity!
person Tempest
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAHHH!!! NO DEATH? You can\'t leave me hanging there, thats sooo mean! I love it! I hope too see the next chapter soon.
person moonlight shadow
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg the suspence is killing me!!! me wants to know what will happen when vegita finds out!!!

:D
person Tempest
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! That was great, love it. Well done. I can\'t wait for the rest!
person Makota
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantastic...I see you\'re dragging out the telling Vegeta about the pregnancy bit. Not nice..but good for you all the same. It builds up the anticipation all the more. ;)
person LadyWater
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo!! I want more!!
person moonlight shadow
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please hurry with another chapter! i love this story!
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well you are now oficially added on to my fav. author\'s list, which is saying something considering your number three and one of those isn\'t even DBZ fandom.

Girl, you\'re outdoing yourself and I think it a damn crime that this isn\'t receiving more attention or more reviews. But screw it, I know genius when I see it and when to praise it. *praise praise*. The important thing is that you\'re enjoying this fic and are proud of it yourself. And from the way that it\'s going it is obvious that you are. You\'re writing style is unmatched save perhaps by other great masters such as Lisalu, in fact I encourage you to write epics as we need someone of your calibur to take her place in the \'epic\' dept. You\'ve all ready written great things, but you belong in higher ranks, if you get my meaning, I think you could do more. Perhaps you will do so with this fic, depending on how long you stretch it out. But this is just my humble opinion.

Anyway, I must thank you for the quick updates, as I said I always look forward to them.

Many kudos.

-Makota
person cooey
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so enjoyable. I can\'t wait to see how it\'s going to resolve over the coming chapters. Tho\' I\'m no Yamcha lover, it\'s nice to see him being treated with a bit of sympathy.
person LadyWater
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More, more!!! I want more! You are my fav writer of B/V!! You are perfect!! Now more!!!

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