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for Always A First Time

by debbiechan

person xvaltheavx
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyla,
Just wanted to drop a note and let you know how absolutely /incredible/ your story is.
You are an amazing writer, I really admire your style, and your the only one I\'ve found so far who really keeps Vegeta in character.
This story is beautifully done, and bless you for updating so often! ^_~

~Althea~
person velika
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO nice so far, you gotta finish it, Please
person Moonlight Shadow
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good i cant wait for the next chapter!
person Quaxo
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, but ch.8 and 9 are exactly the same! Wai!!! Don\'t keep me waiting on such a glorious fanfic!
person Vegeta\'s Mate
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love you for writing this fic; it\'s sweet without being over done, small measures of angst against a back drop of firey passion. I bow at your feet. You are truely one of the most talented authors I\'ve read in a long time.


Love ya!

Vegeta\'s Mate
person Vegeta\'s Mate
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaahhhhhh!!!!!! Chapters 8 & 9 are the same! Great fic, but please fix the last chapter! ~nibbles on her fingernails~ I\'m dying to know what happens!

Love ya!

Vegeta\'s Mate
person Macha
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My favorite paragraph was the one when Bulma was thinking about waiting to happen to her. She was an inventor, she made things happen. Very insightful.
person west dean
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent B/V!
person makota
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yamcha. I almost feel sorry for him, almost.

Jeeeze, where are all of the reviews for this work? This is one of the better B/V\'s I\'ve seen.

Anywho, I want to say how much I like the quoting at the begining of each of your chapters from DBZ. I think it adds some \'realness\' if that makes any sense.

Looking forward to the next update. :)
person Makota
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! That was hot.

I love the detail and Bulma\'s bravery. Nicely done.

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