rate_review Reviews

I really enjoyed this chapter. I LOVE the characterization. You have Bulma and Vegeta down pat. This is one of the more believable portrayals of \'how did they get together?\' that I have ever seen. And that\'s saying something! Great work.

I love this story! Very well written and great characerization....of course I\'m not surprised, I\'ve never come across any of your fics that I didn\'t like! Keep up the great work and I\'ll keep reading!
Kudos!

Well written and I like the length of the chapters
when\'s the next one?

Loving the story so far. The section with Yamcha\'s perspective was a nice touch, all that about only being human really gave you a feel for the frustration he must feel sometimes. I liked that you portrayed his feelings for Bulma, it pisses me off when people write him as a heartless player when he must have felt something for her. And I loved the way you described Vegeta\'s feelings of apathy and emptiness since Frieza\'s death and his constant paranoia and suspicion of Bulma when she spoke to him. Please continue.

Very good. Your write well and I think that you hold close to the characters thougths and feelings. Up-date soon.

I\'m so glad you\'ve finally posted another fic on this site. I love your stories, you truly stick to the nature of the characters more than anyone else. I\'ve enjoyed this fic so far and can\'t wait to read more. Please continue to write! =)