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Oh... I was so happy thinking you had updated...

I first saw this fic in mdiaminer and loved it. I LOVE it when people pair Goku with someone who isn\'t Chichi, cause I don\'t really like her.

Besides, this idea of the perfect human is awesome and new.

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Is there going to be more soon? I reread all that is written and it\'s killing me. When Jaia going to be totally coherent? Where\'s Kakarotto? Heh, where\'s \"Goku\"? What happens when *he* finds out about Jaia genetic perfection? When will Bra realized exactly what her difference is? How will *she* react? Ooh! How will Bulma react? I need to know these things!!

The scene with Vegeta and Trunks ROCKED. I was rather hoping for a greater incident when someone else noticed Gohan\'s mark, but Vegeta took care of that. --\"All laws bow to me.\"-- Love that! Will Gohan miss seeing his mark...even a little?

I also like the irony of Vegeta passing on Jaia. But, now that he knows, how will he manipulate things to work out for him? Is she as good as Saiyan property now (besides being mated to Kakarot now)?

What will happen when Jaia is to fully comprehend things that are happening around her? Will she find out about her perfect DNA? How will she react to any of the Saiyans, particularly Kakarot? How will Bulma react when she figures out everything that has gone on around her, and how long will it take before she does (lol)

I anxiously await the next chapter!

chap 6, well more with bra and vegeta, I want to know how you explain to your daughter\"hey I need to fuck you\" and how in the hell, has Bulma not noticed all the sex going on???

Still I like and the prefect human????? Interesting

chap 4, umm, she broke a rib how can that feel good?(it was a good scene though)

now confused, are you going to write Vegeta taking Bra(please, I want to see how she reacts) and do I have this right but trunks wanted his own sister too?

and Goten is 15, you telling me he\'s doing it with everyone to or just trunks? What was that crack Gohan made about Goten getting mad becuase he\'d bit Trunks

and when did they start marking each other? (haven\'t read tons of DBZ fics so is this just an excepted pratice??)

I must say, I actually like this story, it has a plot and you do yaoi very well,

different but I enjoyed it!, 1st chap- it was good to see goku all mean!!!!!! and wow, on gohan and the rest of them just having sex with each other!

~The wet stickiness of seed and dried blood is what finally awoke him.~

I love the way you tell this story. Kakarotto\'s taking over...what will things be like if/when he does? Please update this soon.

Wow, that\'s awesome. I really hope you write more.

Yeah, Im finally realizing im not reviewing stories i like. Yeah, this is good stuff.